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 **Eyes:** light brown
-Dominic is an unaligned wizard from the village of Tibbin near the city of Carthus in the Southern Domain. Trained as a conjurer, his passion is exploring the re-emergence the study of tapestry calculus. It's a challenging art that allows an awakened (generally, a wizard) person to directly make changes to the tapestry without the use of vis. He has petitioned the Kalari on multiple occasions to allow the calculists to join their ranks, but their craft doesn't use vis. There's an open secret that calculists view the veil as a limiting evil that shrouds AEor in darkness-a darkness they want to rip away. Dominic eventually falls in love with Sarah of Donnelly, a wizard that was cast out of Southern Domain for reasons she wouldn't talk about.
+Dominic is an unaligned wizard from the village of Tibbin near the city of Carthus in the Southern Domain. Trained as a conjurer, his passion is exploring the re-emergence of the study of tapestry calculus. It's a challenging art that allows an awakened (generally, a wizard) person to directly make changes to the tapestry without the use of vis. He has petitioned the Kalari on multiple occasions to allow the calculists to join their ranks, but their craft doesn't use vis. There's an open secret that calculists view the veil as a limiting evil that shrouds AEor in darkness-a darkness they want to rip away. Dominic eventually falls in love with Sarah of Donnelly, a wizard that was cast out of Southern Domain for reasons she wouldn't talk about.
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-**Zael** (Human female, gifted, Princess of Tarquin, aura-dark green)\\
+**Zael of Druswich** (Human female, gifted, Princess of Tarquin, aura-dark green)\\
 **Hair:** light brown\\
 **Eyes:** golden brown
-Zael was found wandering by Jairin after she fled her village. Jairin raised her for ten years as his own daughter. Her father is a necromancer and when his wife died in pregnancy, he kept her alive—delivering Zael before allowing her mother to pass. Zael's back is scarred from beatings and a fire which nearly killed her when she was young. In Shadows of the Unleashed and the first half of Flight of the Avians, Zael cannot speak. She has familiared a Dalion’s Ridge Hawk named Llanawa.
+Zael was found wandering by Jairin after she fled her village. Jairin raised her for ten years as his own daughter. Her father is a necromancer named Valdon. When his wife Sharon of Druswich died in pregnancy, he kept her alive with his craft—delivering Zael before allowing her mother to pass. Valdon has always blamed Zael for Sharon's death, among all the other down moments of his life that followed. Zael's back is scarred from beatings and a fire which nearly killed her when she was young. In Shadows of the Unleashed and most of Flight of the Avians, Zael cannot speak. She is awakened and has familiared a Dalion’s Ridge Hawk named Llanawa.
 **Llanawa:** "Mother of twenty-three. Or twenty-one. The lynx killed her last clutch. She is called Llanawa the Gifted, and until ten minutes ago she never knew why.”
-To Zael, the world of death is as real as the world of living. Her mother died before she was born and her father abandoned her to lead a life as a beggar when she was only five. At the age of 12, Zael began fainting at unpredictable intervals. In the brief moments while she passes out, she lives another life on the other side. Born Sharon of Druswich, she was chased from her village at age 16; suspected of being possessed by a demon. Zael’s father, a suspected rogue wizard, always blamed her for her mother’s death. She claims her mother once located her on the other side to tell her she was killed by her husband as sacrifice in a demon ritual. Zael believes her destiny is to find and join the wizard Rowan the Wise. Zael is brave and eternally dedicated, but easily confused.
+To Zael, the world of death is as real as the world of living. She ran from her father's torture and survived briefly as a beggar before being adopted by Jairin of Glensong. As long as she can remember, Zael has fainted at unpredictable intervals. In the brief moments while she passes out, she lives another life in an Other Place (not another place.) She was chased from her village, accused by her father of being a demon. From whispers in the Other Place, Zael has pieced together that her father had been trying to use his wife Sharon as an essence source to summon a demon--a skill he did not have as a necromancer. The spell targeted the then-unknown child Sharon carried and it went haywire, shortly after claiming Sarah's life. Zael is stunningly beautiful, but hides her scars from the world. She has set out on adventure with Katherine "Raven" of Glensong.